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Penetration
Dance of light through unstill depths
So I, too, swim in you
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written in response to the Haiku Horizons prompt: bright
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Penetration
Dance of light through unstill depths
So I, too, swim in you
.
.
written in response to the Haiku Horizons prompt: bright
wow— this is quite good , Feve ! 🙂
Thank you. 🙂
I find haiku quite difficult to write properly, so I appreciate your appreciation. (There’s a lot more to it than 5-7-5!) It’s a challenging form.
As it was explained to me;
Raid
Kills Bugs
Dead
Perfect haiku
Ha!
That’s a 5-3-5 inverted (“American”) syllabic construction. But there’s no seasonal reflection or senryu-style humanism. So… Almost. 🙂
Haiku – following the actual rules of writing a haiku – is much more complicated than people think.