Trainer’s Log: Exercise Room Training, Parsin Estate, September 1897
5 Sept. TRAINING. Subject: Jedediah Oren; Trainers: Miss Wunderly (unclothed) and Miss Straton (clothed) — stimulation applied, alternating speed of stroke continually — reactions: tumescence, shivering, protuberance of vein along shaft, shortness of breath, loss of balance, eventual faint. Control excellent. No expulsion of seed.
8 Sept. TRAINING. Subject: Jedediah Oren; Trainer: Miss Wunderly (clothed) — subject non-combative, appeared dazed, asked if in a dream — general attitude: responsive, cooperative — change of stimulus: held small portrait of subject’s fiancee, Miss O.T., in front of his eyes while applying stimulation — reactions: sweat, shivering, immediate tumescence, leaking of clear viscus fluid from the tip of his member, shortness of breath, vocalizations mimicking the throat-growl of a dog waiting to pounce. Arousal heightened compared to 5 Sept. Control excellent.
10 Sept. TRAINING/TRAINEE. Subject: Jedediah Oren, Nurse: Miss Wunderly (clothed), Guest Observing: Miss O.T. — Mr Oren’s attitude: dreamlike, disbelieving — reactions to Miss Wunderly immediate, palpitations evident in vein alongside neck as well as alongside shaft — reactions to Miss O.T.: trembling, purpling of member, loss of breath, clenched abdominal muscles, shouting, hoarseness of voice, eventual collapse. Control excellent. Add’nl Note: Miss O.T. is an adept student, clearly understanding the correlation between stimulus and response. She asked clear and concise questions about the tactics used in this exercise and has requested to bring her notebook the next time we practice.
12 Sept. TRANSITION TO TRAINEE. Subject: Jedediah Oren, Practitioner: Miss Ophelia Thistlewaite, Trainer (Observing only): Miss Wunderly — stimulation applied: continual, waxing and waning speed, up-and-down strokes along the shaft — additional note: eye contact, nearly continual, between J.O. and O.T. — reactions: smiling, trembling lips, shaking/trembling in thighs, tightening of abdominal muscles, breathing patterns waxing and waning in company with change of stimulation, minor beading of sweat on brow, adam’s apple contracting, near-continual leaking of clear viscous fluid from tip of member. Add’nl Note: Have given chastity device to Miss Thistlewaite and explained its function and fitting. Tomorrow when we complete our practice exercises, Miss Thistlewaite will cool Mr Oren’s member with a cold cloth to reduce its tumescence, then apply the device. Only she will thereafter have the key.
This foray into fiction is Part Four of a short series I am writing in response to the current Erotic Fiction Deluxe prompt, The Key.
I know this is my issue ‘speaking’ and not anything written that is offensive, but the descriptions…………….valid for their intent as they are………always make me wonder: ‘so, what if these reactions didn’t occur? What if the embarrassment of the training scenario resulted in shrinkage rather than erection? What if the protagonist was like me and had ED issues? Would he be ridiculed? Punished? Rejected outright as unsuitable?’ When such a response is described in a way as to make it titillating and desirable, I can’t help but imagine the implication of the reverse and the value/worth/desirability connected to it. I guess having the issues I have for as long as I’ve had, has turned scenarios such as this one into a big ‘trigger’. Maybe if I didn’t have the issues I have I’d find this more relatable and appealing, but as described it just triggers a ‘why me?’ kind of depression and anger.
It’s not your fault. It’s a good story with an interesting premise. But for me, when the scenes become more graphically erection-oriented, I can’t help feeling as I do. Sorry. I want to be supportive of your creativity but I may have to step back from this particular tale.
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That’s understandable.
I did think about your “what If it was a different response?” scenario as I was writing and consciously chose not to go there, in the interests of time. Were I writing something longer or less obviously fictional, I might explore that option.
Tomorrow’s post will be the last, and it is not graphically sexual. I quite understand if you wish to skip it though.
Phew, what an intense training for these guys, especially in their day and age 😉 I hope it works out well in their marriages.
Victorians were not so prurient as many people believe.
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Training is what you need. I hope they find it useful.