Fire, Water

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bright streak of sunlight reflected on water during sunset



Dance of light through unstill depths

So I, too, swim in you



written in response to the Haiku Horizons prompt: bright

4 thoughts on “Fire, Water

    1. Mrs Fever Post author

      Thank you. 🙂

      I find haiku quite difficult to write properly, so I appreciate your appreciation. (There’s a lot more to it than 5-7-5!) It’s a challenging form.

    1. Mrs Fever Post author


      That’s a 5-3-5 inverted (“American”) syllabic construction. But there’s no seasonal reflection or senryu-style humanism. So… Almost. 🙂

      Haiku – following the actual rules of writing a haiku – is much more complicated than people think.

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