This is an unmapped love, traversed
across uncharted terrain, over unknown waters
navigated by the northern stars blinking bright against
the night-dark of stubborn
tender
hearts.
It is not a road less travelled, but a path newly forged –
Road: Forked
(you go your way, I’ll go mine)
[separate ≠ alone]
– hands outstretched across the divide,
holding on over cut-skin sawgrass median and
not
letting
GO
but opening closed-grip palm-holds so the bird of opposite feather held there can fly. Free.
This is aeleron love. It is an hurtling exploration across blue-rain cloud-skies. A long-flight plane ride filled with pre-boarding anticipation, cramped coach-class cocophanous claustrophobia giving way to
wonder-filled expulsion of relieved
held breath amazement
upon arrival at
Destination: UNKNOWN
This is a mountain-trail love, root-tripped and steep-dangerous, an ever-winding upward trek, leaving us winded. Breathless.
It is a highway love, stretching its pavement into arms-thrown-wide open deserts, covered by the worn-blanket promise of eternal sky, leading infinitely onward, to
jungles. tundras. savannahs.
MOUNTAINS
(volcanic)
High we stand, cliff-face adventurers at the edge of the life-ledges we create, surveying the geological impossibilities we’ve traversed thus far, our paths marked with the footprints of Who We Once Were, our bodies wearing the blood-wounds of brambles climbed o’er, the sweat stains of exertion overwhelming, the scabbed-over scarred proof our tenacity.
Is that a salt tear that stings my eye when I look at you through their chameleon blue and see how far we’ve come? (No. It is the whip- wind sting. The storm-water prick from electric air sky.)
Take my hand.
Survey our history.
Catch your breath.
Sate here, with me, your restless wanderlust.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
This is a travelling love, a constantly moving journey, most poignantly remembered in the quiet finger-interlaced open-arm moments when we stand/sit/kneel/lie –
–quietly, contemplatively–
– together.still.
Wow this is incredible. So much to read and think about and so much amazing imagery 😊
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Perfect timing Feve. Beautiful. Thanks.
Indie xx
I really think this is one of your best writes, Feve,
and inspires all sorts of visual and sensual ideas.
Thanks.
I wrote something similar (style, not content) once, incorporating song lyrics into my prose. I was tempted to weave some Journey lyrics into this one, what with the title and all, but I think I’ll save that exercise for another time. 😉
Oh Feve, this is so beautiful, so filled with love. I have no words to describe how much this touched me!
Rebel xox
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I read once that the strength of a relationship is often determined by how well people travel together.
We’ve traveled some tough roads, but we’re still going strong.
I suspect you can relate. xoxo
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I simply love this! The language, the from, the energy. It’s been a long time since I saw a poem on someone’s blog that I loved this much!
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Thank you! 🙂
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